venkat wrote on 11
th Oct, 2017 at 2:57pm:
Can anyone check my blog and tell me whether it shows any error?
My blog is:
http://real-home-jobs-india.blogspot.com Actually I hosted some HTML files on 000webhost and embedded into this blog. It is showing perfectly on my laptop and mobile, but despite my promotions, no one seems to comment or contact.
No, there are no errors for me.
What I would recommend firstly is to change your content title (YOU HAVE BEEN REFERRED BY: 86840911).
It is kind of confusing (if not threatening) in case the visitor doesn't know what the site is about. You can always state the referrer at sign up forms, like all sites do.
I'd recommend using something simpler like "Earn extra cash with your regular shopping".
Then smaller text below it.. "Share this page with your friends and family, and earn even more!"
Then you can break down how it works, with as few words as possible. Be straight to the point, and keep details in a FAQ page.
The question-answer format is easier to follow.
One more notice.. when viewing your blog in a laptop with a 1366x768 resolution, I can only see until the first two lines.. title and subtitle.
So, clicking on other pages does not seem to update the content at all, because it is happening below my actual view range.
Maybe converting your blog to a single page website and using html anchors in your menu would also help with navigation.
And maybe you should even change your main header title from "Real Opportunity from Home" to "Make Money from Home" or something more active.
You want to motivate your visitor to act, not just to inform him of your service.
Also you don't need to prove that you are for real in the title.. at least not by just stating it.. it's better to let the details do the job, so maybe stating that in your main title is kind of "trying too hard" to prove yourself and this tends more to plant doubts.
That's all I can think of for now.. I hope it helps.